My brother decided to try some as he calls it "Shuga-ken Haiku". Meaning: Hawaii used to grow sugar cane and historically is very much like another Japanese province. Therefore, Shuga == Sugar in old Hawaii Japanese and cane == ken (ending for Japanese province). His pen name is Satoou Kibi
Ai no akari
Kuroi yu
Atsui yume
Ai no hagakure
Toshi nashi
Ningen gojyunen
Hi ga kure
Ai no kotoba
Yoru no ame
Aoi sora
Midori no ha
Utsukushi Tsuta
Utsukushi tabi mae
Ame no yoru
Ten no butsu
............................Simplicity is the ultimate form of sophistication..................
